Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years there has been a hot debate about the need to spend money on education instead of recreation and sports. The problem is that most people understand education as just giving students some general academic knowledge. I fundamentally disagree with this point if view for many reasons
First of all , education is a reasonable combination of studies , physical activity, teamwork and fun. In this regard, the government should take care of all aspects of a child's development. It is necessary to explain to people that a successful education system includes a combination of work and rest. This basic physiological statement was discovered in the 19th century, but unfortunately it has been forgotten by many people.
A weak and unhealthy person can not be an efficient memeber of a society because he will probably spends a lot of time restoring his or her health. That is why government should spend more money on different recreational facilities for these people and not on education alone.
To conclude, it is evident to me that the main purpose of education is to develop physical and mental abilities. Hence Government expenditures should be on expanding the true form of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13705583756 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02159262131 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4285272873 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267939385446 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970223233667 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979419048028 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148387321435 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579412255729 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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