The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the honey bee's life cycle would be at different stages. The life cycle of a honey bee from laying eggs to the growth of new bees which are again able to produce eggs will take around 34-36 days.
Overall, there are six stages in the life cycle of a honey bee that involves a number of eggs that will lay by each matured female bee, the eggs hatching process, and how a small honey bee emerges out from an egg and grow to maturity level.
Firstly, Females bees lay eggs only one or two in the period of three days. Consequently, laid eggs will be hatched after around nine to ten days. Subsequently, New bees will emerge out from the hatched eggs by the female honey bee after 5 days with a Nymph. Their size will grow and Nymphs will moult 3 times in the first seven days and then the next nine days and then comes out as young adults. Lastly, These young adults grow into maturity stage after 4 days and they will start laying eggs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bees'' or 'bee's'?
Suggestion: bees'; bee's
The diagram illustrates how the honey bees life cycle would be at different stages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31868131868 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96991623666 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8941229813 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101802930379 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562753673207 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541516280372 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962310369414 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508425934014 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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