Teaching children and young people how to behave is the responsibility of parents,
not schools or government.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Educating the youngest generations is often a topic of debate. Many people argue that it is the duty of the family to teach their children an appropriate social behavior. In my opinion, although parents are responsible for their children until their majority, I would object that the educational system and the community in general have also an essential role in their education.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that parents are responsible for their children as the law requires to feed them, provide a shelter and education until their majority. Their behavior in society will be primarily modeled at home as they will repeat what they have seen at home. As a consequence, it is primordial for the parents to be a role models in order to provide their children the best examples to follow.
On the other hand, I believe that parents are not the only players in children education. Schools and associations are an important place to socialize with persons from outside of the family cell. Teachers, educators and other children have a crucial role in the development of their social skills as they will be acquainted to individuals from other social and family backgrounds. A child without any contact with the outside world would experience difficulties to be successfully integrated in the society.
To summarize, although the role of parents is crucial to prepare their children to future social interactions, they are not the sole responsible as they delegate their tuition to the education system when they are at school. In my opinion this will give children the opportunity to be given other examples than the ones given at home, developing better develop their social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04642857143 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79598609891 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4490223526 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12472932082 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562278540995 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402528884901 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869408513028 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177397111524 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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