People in today's world have become too dependent on automobiles.
In the progressive world where we live, people's lifestyle has been changed compared with the past. In this line of thought, there is a controversial question as to whether nowadays, people are fond of their automobile and depend on the cars more than in the past. Some people think the new lifestyles and the current life condition have led to use car much more than previous; however, others disagree. I, for one, concur with the former group for two conspicuous reasons that I will elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, because of the ever-increasing population, urban construction has developed in recent decades. To be more specific, these days many people have to live in remote areas, which are far away from downtown. In this situation, people need to give a ride to go to the workplace or other places. Moreover, in many cities especially in developing countries, public transportation is not efficacious enough. There are wide distances that are not still being covered by public transportation. Therefore, in such a circumstance, to avoid wasting time and energy by using inefficient public transportation, people tend to use their personal cars in order to commute. For example, my home is located in a remote area and it is a long-distance to my work place that it is also out of the city. Hence, I am dependent on my car not only to go to work but also to go to other places.
Another exquisite reason that comes to mind is that these days, automobile producer companies encounter a heated rivalry to produce more comfortable and attractive cars, to satisfy car users as much as possible. To elucidate on, car producers offer high-quality cars at affordable prices so as to make more customers. In this situation, many people have a chance of owning their own cars. Apparently, when people afford a perfect car with the best facilities and options, they tend to use these convenient cars instead of struggling with long walks and crowded public transportation. The relief they experience in such automobiles encourages them to use their cars every day. Take the Tesla Motors Company as an example. Tesla produces the smartest cars in the world. The invaluable options that it offers like automatic driving without the interference of the driver, have made them a favorite for everyone. So, such services tempt people to use cars more than in the past.
All in all, having the two conspicuous reasons into account, I vehemently assert that these days, people depend on their cars more than ever. They inevitably use their cars in order to cope with long distances. Additionally, with the advent of smart and progressive cars, which facilitate driving, people have more inclination to use cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ught, there is a controversial question as to whether nowadays, people are fond of their auto...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... high-quality cars at affordable prices so as to make more customers. In this situation,...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople have more inclination to use cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99339207048 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88714431267 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539647577093 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4803671974 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4583333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174353269195 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532929536202 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477737713079 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124416825502 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334695340359 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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