Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework play an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Iit is common belief that shool children should not be given homework by their teachers. however there is a more persuasive argument that homework play an important role in the education of children
There are several reasons why people might argue that homework is an unnecessary burden . Countries such as Finland, where school children are not given home work, and outperform nations where setting homework is the norm. Secondly,many parents would agree that the school day is already long enough, and leaves their children too tired to do further study when they return home. Finally, it is recognised that play time is one way to get brain development.
In spite of the above arguments , I support the view that homework has the important roles in the schooling of children. The main benefit of homework is that it encourage the solving anh thinking skill. I as children are challenged to work through tasks alone and at their own pace. besides, students must apply the knowledge that they have learnt in the classroom. For example, by doing mathematics exercises at home, students absorb their understanding of the content taught by their teacher at school. In my view, it is important for children to develope study habits because this prepares them to work alone as adults.
In conclusion, homework certainly has its drawbacks, but I believe that the benefits dominate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, however, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10572687225 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64657643234 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6197163141 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415515414332 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137001816653 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102367307504 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242074459196 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111156190689 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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