Write a passage (180 words) to compare life in urban areas and rural areas.
This essay evaluates life in urban areas and rural areas. The evidence presented in this assignment has shown that living in urban areas and rural areas are different: Occupational mobility; the rapid development of markets and supermarkets.
To begin with, there is a clear difference between occupational mobility in urban and rural areas. Particularly, occupational mobility in urban areas is considered highly. The diversity in the occupational structure in urban areas gives individuals many opportunities to choose and change careers to suit their interests, conditions. In contrast, that hardly happens in rural areas due to underdeveloped infrastructure.
Besides, the rapid development of markets and supermarkets also shows the stark contrast of life in both areas. Cities depend on public services and markets because they do not directly produce necessities. Meanwhile, rural families often produce the necessities for daily living by themselves. So markets and supermarkets have poor coverage.
Clearly, this essay has pointed out the main factors affecting life in urban and rural areas through the opposition of occupational mobility and the rapid development of markets and supermarkets in both areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, while, in contrast, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74585635359 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17714626938 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.004297336 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30982203844 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136909723031 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106546135637 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21335221548 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11427403773 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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