The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo

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The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo.

The pictures describe how an igloo is constructed.
As illustrated in the diagram, there are 13 stages of construction, starting with the formation of snow blocks and ending with the ventilation stage for the igloo.
At the beginning of the process, hard-packed snow is cut into large blocks using a snow saw. After that, the snow saw is utilized for smoothing the edges of the blocks before the stage when those blocks are erected in a circular pattern. A larger snow block is used to fit the opening on top, while an entrance is created by digging a hole beneath the snow-blocked wall.
After the igloo is erected, all crevices outside are packed with snow, and the wall inside the igloo is smoothed manually. An entrance gate is formed in shape, then the entrance hole is covered by snow blocks above. At the ending stage, holes are created in the wall or the roof for ventilation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55868016396 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9955354295 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165749323863 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807776057181 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692491697957 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129924530528 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590224646303 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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