Task 2 : Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that newspapers are an optimal way to learn news. While there might be some reasons to support that idea, I believe that other media are also better at updating news for everyone.
On the one hand, the option to read newspapers is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, newspapers' content is pledged. It is happening because it is always heavily censored before publishing. As a result, readers could avoid misleading information which is rife on the Internet. Secondly, academic writing style is written in newspapers by professional reporters so people can enhance and broaden their vocabulary as well as language proficiency.
On the other hand, media platforms are apparently convenient to learn news. These days, with the development of technology, everyone is able to access the news on user-friendly websites which provide up-and-coming information by using a laptop or a smartphone. Moreover, readers do not wait days or weeks for newspaper publication compared to social media which deliver news in a matter of minutes. In addition, besides traditional newspapers, other media offer various sources of information. Therefore, readers are provided diversity information with multiple perspectives instead of one-way newspapers.
In conclusion, in my opinion, although there are some advantages of newspapers, it is advisable that people should learn news from different sources to enrich knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pectives instead of one-way newspapers. In conclusion, in my opinion, although t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61009174312 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08580610373 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651376146789 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.06428386 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314704543555 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101461539427 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918393861773 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190287158775 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902320424083 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.