Today more people are travelling than ever before Why is this the case What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

Submitted by Summy on Mon, 06/14/2021 - 01:46

It has been observed that nowadays a large portion of the population is travelling more compared to the past. In this essay, I will mention the major reasons for this trend and significant benefits one may receive by travelling.
Several factors contribute to this development. Firstly, owing to advancements in the transport industry, travelling has become more secure, convenient and comfortable than ever before. Besides,due to cut-throat competition among airlines, companies' tariffs have fallen sharply. for instance, according to a report published in The Time of India newspaper last Sunday reveals the fact that every year air travel is growing at a rate of 21%. Secondly, because of globalization people travel extensively for various reasons such as for leisure, study, business, and research. Finally, the rising financial status of citizens is also considered for the boom in the travel industry.
Travelling offers numerous advantages as well for travellers. Major one being one can explore a variety of culture, traditions, customs and languages of different countries. In addition one may learn new things from others and help in expanding his horizon of thinking eventually leads to open-mindedness, which is beneficial to society. Furthermore, people can renew the energy, refresh their mind and blow their stress away when they
In conclusion, convenience, comfort, and low prices can be attributed to the rise in travel whereas; learning new things and relieving stress can be considered as few pros of travelling to travellers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51464435146 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04461091821 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661087866109 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4570762583 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4166666667 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339392005308 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11524187463 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802611763968 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189722963644 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868197391013 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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