In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
In some parts of the world, adolescents are working at the same time they are completing their studies. In my opinion, I firmly believe that it can have a detrimental influence on their curriculums, but also on their future careers and personal development.
The first reason for this is that it may be extremely difficult to cope with a job while studying at high school or during the first years of university, school years that are generally quite demanding in terms of dedication and time spent in class. In order to be able to attend his work, the student may have to skip some classes, leading to a fall in his result, complicating the access to higher studies, and finally jeopardizing a career according to his capacities.
Another argument against the idea of having a job at an early age is relating to a prejudicial disruption of their family life. As the teenagers are working, they are becoming more independent and they earn their own salary. As a consequence, they will experience a false sensation of early achievements in comparison with their counterparts who are still at school, encouraging them to drop out of school. Moreover, as they feel autonomous, they may be tempted to start a family prematurely without having the maturity required, compromising definitely successful studies and their personal development in the society.
To summarize, while teenagers’ employment is widespread in some regions of the world, I would strongly object that it may produce a negative impact on young peoples’ education as they may abandon their studies and consequently it may also affect their personal lives as they may enter in adulthood too early. In order to keep the youth at school, the parents and governments should push to enforce laws prohibiting child labour and compulsory education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07357859532 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96881477066 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3525821984 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.7 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163238337116 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646526914353 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265422205631 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094887957624 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226943389316 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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