It is widely known that despite cars damage the environment, their manufacturer and their use continue to increase. Why is the case? How can this be controlled? TRI - HOMEWORK - MAY 22
The incresing of corporate which make automoblies and users is relising on gobal unit. Therefore what will happen in the future and what will human being has faced and the reason why the numbers of them still develop that will be slove in this essay.
At first, people ought to consider and criticise that they are really understand about car. Because of the innovation of the gobal mean of transport alway occurs speedily, the car can be divived in three main kind till today. And only one kind of them harms the eviroment mostly, the internal combustion engine. In contract, neither hidro engine nor electrical engine do sensitive harm on life. Another contributing factor is that we are living in the world which is reaching to the future life, space life. If we continute develop in making safe or less attcking pollutant outside the earth, it will stay cool in a few more time. Till that human may find the our renewable energy which has sufficent strong for our progressive development proccess.
In my opinion, it is not necessary that a stric action can reduce our speed. Attually, in a few year today, the world goverment, esspecially the European who is one of the pioneers in law making which will prohit any machine using ICE in next 5 years. That is why human are getting to close to the unharmful engine and we do not need to worry about it so far. However, for more convincing, nowadays, each every country has their own law to protect their people depend on sitiation and life.
In conlusion, enviroment still a problem that we have to concern about but it will not a matter to much in the near future where we learn how to control and protect our plannet by using safe engergy. So it is easy to understand that many manufactures and users growing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...es and users is relising on gobal unit. Therefore what will happen in the future and what...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...ider and criticise that they are really understand about car. Because of the innovation of...
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Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...few more time. Till that human may find the our renewable energy which has sufficent st...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r our progressive development proccess. In my opinion, it is not necessary that ...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... concern about but it will not a matter to much in the near future where we learn ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65495207668 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45145166921 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.99705694 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122576913194 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337813392601 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03232043984 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728550770274 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170299650127 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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