The demand for water is increasing and has become a global problem. What are the causes and solutions.
This is a fact scarcity of natural resources is being increased at world level. Population shows an increasing trend which leads to demand for fresh water. There are several reasons that why demand for ground water is escalating at higher rate and number of measures can be taken to curb this issue.
On the one hand, rising demand for water has a few causes which i am going to discuss. Firstly, the growing population is primary reason to pump up fresh water as this is basic need of all living things and no one can survive without water. Secondly, technical advancements are taking place day by day as most of the innovations are based on electricity that raises the need for producing more energy. As a consequent, huge amount of water is used to generate energy because fresh water is the main element for producing energy such as Dams holds huge water in electric power plants. That is why, the level of underground water is going down. Finally, freshwater is utilized for the irrigation of crops for their healthy growth which is an important reason of pumping ground water by engines.
On the other hand, along with the causes of rising demand for water, there are some solutions that can help in saving fresh water sources. First of all, water is renewable natural resource and can be used for other purposes. To be more specific, rainwater can be saved for irritation of crops then there would be no need to use ground water. Besides this, for the development of country launching technologies is most significant;however, today there is great need yo protect the natural resources. So, the use of freshwater should be decreased for upcoming generations otherwise they would be deprived from the natural resources like water, trees, coal and many more. Apart from this, if there will be awareness among people regarding saving water, then people would collaborate to save water resources such as oceans, rivers and most important one is ground water.
To conclude, although there are some causes of high demand of freshwater yet i believe that by creating awareness among people and collaboration government, freshwater could be saved for next generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96438356164 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66755630372 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509589041096 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2747106145 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278653071263 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114563550237 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711202826938 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181483797749 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428380264728 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.