TEST 17: ONE OF THE MAJOR PROBLEMS THAT FACE TODAY’S GORVENMENT IS CREATING ENOUGH SATISFACTORY HOUSING FOR THEIR INCREASING POPULATIONS, WHILST STILL TRYING TO PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT.
DISCUSS THIS STATEMENT AND GIVE YOUR OPINION
The ever-growing population is an universal issue; as a result government across the world are struggling to meet the housing needs of their citizens. In my view, people should have options to choose their style of house, on the contrary not at the cost environmental destruction. I will discuss the demand of this issue and plausible measure to tackle the dire straits.
To commence with, housing is considered as one of the basic needs of human being. Governments across the world are exploring range of solutions which respond not only the accommodation of people but also their suitable of stay. Not everyone has the same housing needs and economic standards. For instance, obviously a successful businessman or high achiever would not love to live in a small living room or bedroom. Because he or she works too hard to reach at this level and deserve a better lifestyle. And that is how to maintain a social structure. People will desire to successful so that they can enjoy their high living standards happily. Unfortunately, the more houses are built to meet and ensure human’s life the closest of deforestation we face with. To be more specific, we are dealing directly with the biodiversity of this world. While, the estate agencies are rambling building, they ignore the environment damage and keep cutting woods purposefully. This is pertinent issue which strike the government directly to a balance between citizens’ housing needs and keep the surroundings green and healthy.
In order for the government to maintain the healthy environmental state, they ought to recognize how significant under controlled this problem is and ensure the quality and quantity of building which are built through every project is sensible. Unless it affects directly to the biodiversity and does harm to human’life, they do not manage it correctly and closely. They rather have a specific solution to solve it than a temporary one such as: increasing height of buildings to save space, increasing buildings costs to pressure the population into living in smaller areas. Because this issue is not a simple problem which can be solved thoroughly in a certain way.
Personally, there is no simple way or solution to minimize habitat while increasing housing. Most of all solutions which are proposed are temporary and unity. Consequently, if there is any way chosen, it should be one that causes the fewest problems.
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- TEST 17 ONE OF THE MAJOR PROBLEMS THAT FACE TODAY S GORVENMENT IS CREATING ENOUGH SATISFACTORY HOUSING FOR THEIR INCREASING POPULATIONS WHILST STILL TRYING TO PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT DISCUSS THIS STATEMENT AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
The ever-growing population is an universal issue; as a result government...
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Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...opulation into living in smaller areas. Because this issue is not a simple problem whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13417721519 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88020054848 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2463579494 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8095238095 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148080809787 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390651820873 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237989868231 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838797886568 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276028929412 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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