Some people believe that family is more important than friends. What do you think?
In this recent era, it is not only arduous to find confidencial company but also impossible to share emotions with others. Moreover, it is reckoned by a significant amount of people that friends are less significant than family, while I ponder that friends are equally vital. Because friends do not hesitate to assit in any harsh circumstances, I will expain with reason in following paragraphs.
To initiate with, the prominent reason is that whenever someone has true friend, they have blind trust with each other for anything just like family members. Even though we do not have blood relation with these friends, we ready to do every possible thing to make them content. For example, luckily I have one an honest friend with whom I would like to share each and every detail either professional or peronal. To be more precise, sometimes friends only can help to abate mental stress in compare to family members. If we cannot discuss any serious issue with immidiate family, then we can talk with friend and they always give the best advise. Eventually, friends are like pills which can remove our pain without drugs.
on the other side, sometimes family member can have different opinion due to society pressure or peer pressure or we can feel stress ourself or sceptical, this moment we can find acurate solution with friend only. For instance, one Times of India survey declared that people who have more friends feel more security in terms of emotional bonding and can deem unfearlessly. In addition to this, unless we cannot found true friend, we do not do the same. Ultimately, friends can be a person who can help us without any selfishness.
In conclusion, weather family support us or not, friends always support us. It had better have some valuable and indeed friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ich can remove our pain without drugs. on the other side, sometimes family member...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91390728477 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49115799653 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9940917152 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199176723851 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740615911799 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439579354797 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127079293622 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154369571607 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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