Some people think that should start study at there early age other think that the children should start their study at age seven

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Some people think that should start study at there early age, other think that the children should start their study at age seven

Although some people assert that children should engaged with studying at early age, some individuals believe that the age seven is the best to start study. In my opinion, latter view is the best option.

On the one hand, there are limited number of reason why student should start their schooling at younger age. the brain develop enough to understand and remember the things they taught at the age 5. In addition, in these competitive world, due to advancement, the children at early age become familiar with computer programs. To cite an example, In present time, more and more children are learning about coding which help them to make an application. Therefore, To compete with other they should start going to school as soon as they aged 5.

On the other hand, there are two prominent reasons due to which they should start their studies at the age seven. Firstly, at early age, they will not be mature enough to understand what they have been taught. Secondly, the time period upto the age seven, they should be engaged in learning other skills which make them a better learner and people. In other words, they should be learn about manners and behavioral habits which help them in future. For instance, In some country like Japan, they teaches their child about the moral of life and some basic fundamental manners which will benefits them in their school at the time of learning. This, the benefits outraced drawbacks of starting studies at the age seven.

In recapitulation, despite some group of people think to start schooling at early age, I believe the actual studies should be start at age seven because children are mature enough to understand the importance of studies.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lthough some people assert that children should engaged with studying at early ag...
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...h computer programs. To cite an example, In present time, more and more children ...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
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...of learning. This, the benefits outraced drawbacks of starting studies at the age...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
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...lieve the actual studies should be start at age seven because children are mature...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36678240458 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493055555556 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4859528391 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.580946769424 0.244688304435 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228898077858 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180570979026 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.427941924519 0.151304729494 283% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102806514232 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lthough some people assert that children should engaged with studying at early ag...
^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...d start their schooling at younger age. the brain develop enough to understand and ...
^^^
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'develops'.
Suggestion: develops
...eir schooling at younger age. the brain develop enough to understand and remember the t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h computer programs. To cite an example, In present time, more and more children ...
^^
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke an application. Therefore, To compete with other they should start going to s...
^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation. Therefore, To compete with other they should start going to school as soo...
^^
Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...art going to school as soon as they aged 5. On the other hand, there are two ...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...to school as soon as they aged 5. On the other hand, there are two prominent ...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... people. In other words, they should be learn about manners and behavioral habits whi...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s and behavioral habits which help them in future. For instance, In some country like Jap...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...tance, In some country like Japan, they teaches their child about the moral of life and...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d about the moral of life and some basic fundamental manners which will benefits ...
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Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amental manners which will benefits them in their school at the time of learning....
^^
Line 5, column 672, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of learning. This, the benefits outraced drawbacks of starting studies at the age...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'started'?
Suggestion: started
... I believe the actual studies should be start at age seven because children are matu...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lieve the actual studies should be start at age seven because children are mature...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36678240458 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493055555556 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4859528391 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.580946769424 0.244688304435 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228898077858 0.084324248473 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180570979026 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.427941924519 0.151304729494 283% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102806514232 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.