Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Creativity is an important factor for innovation, without innovation the development of our world may slow down. After seeing so many amazing innovations happened in past two decades, some people may worry that technology has made children today less creative that in the past, since there are more distraction today. However, I do not believe that technology has made children today less creative. Instead, I believe that technology has brought more means to inspire children's creativity.
To begin with, some people believe that children in the past were more creative than children today, since children before did not have a lot of distraction. So they could put more attention on their surrounded environment, and they could also have more time on thinking. In contrast, children today have more different distractions, such as video games and social media, which make them spend most of their time on receiving information. And therefore, children today are more like receivers than creators.
However, receiving great amount of information does not really mean that children today can not become creators. With more information that receive, children today have more diversified stimulation that can inspire them to come up with new ideas. For example, there are enormous children today started composing music or writing rap lyrics since they were eight years old. This is because the technology has leaded them to contact with different culture easily, which could help them develop their hobbies in their early ages, and do not necessarily need their parents' help.
Moreover, technology provide a convenient way for them to learn new skills. We all know that the best way to learn new skills is to start from mimicking others. Rather than just distracted children, technology like Internet provides a good way to help them inmate those artists way easier than before. And with the help of diversified information that they received, it is likely that new cultures or artworks will be created. For instance, there are many children start editing and uploading videos on Tik Tok, a popular social media, today. And some of the videos that they uploaded become viral between adults.
To sum up, despite there were lots of creative inventions in the past, children today, however, express their creativity in their own way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'medium'?
Suggestion: medium
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...Tok, a popular social media, today. And some of the videos that they uploaded become viral ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25066666667 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57919746347 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530666666667 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2191089159 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.631578947 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215387665626 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777651475276 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596320751397 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13610782437 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357950377906 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.