The diagrams illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth.
The figures illustrate the silkworm's life cycle and the process of silk cloth manufacture.
It is clear that there are four stages in the life cycle of the silkworm, beginning with the spawn of a bunch of eggs and ending with the growth of a mature moth. To produce silk cloth, five different steps are performed in sequence.
At the first stage in the silkworm's life cycle, numerous eggs are spawned by a moth. After 10 days, eggs become silkworm larvae and mulberry leaf is their main food source. The silkworm larva then creates silk thread covered outside its body in the following four to six weeks. From three days to a maximum of eight days, silk thread is then totally become a roll of a cocoon and after 16 days, the larva will grow up to a mature moth and the life cycle is repeated again.
To produce silk moths, the cocoons are selected carefully. Next, they are boiled with a certain amount of water in a pot. After boiling, cocoons are unwound into a large number of threads with an average of 300 to 900 meters in length. Those threads are twisted and dyed in a color-pot or they can be weaved into a completed fabric and then dyed subsequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
The figures illustrate the silkworms life cycle and the process of silk clot...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
...in sequence. At the first stage in the silkworms life cycle, numerous eggs are spawned b...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeated'.
Suggestion: repeated
... to a mature moth and the life cycle is repeated again. To produce silk moths, the cocoons ar...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...After boiling, cocoons are unwound into a large number of threads with an average of 300 to 900 m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49056603774 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29303509959 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561320754717 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2562042854 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5454545455 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315029882317 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129355083004 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139217813727 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242600095962 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167876619812 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.