nowadays people experience pressure and stress more than before
what are the reasons for this?
what can be done to solve this problem?
Pressure, tension, depress or strain are recent problems that each person in our era has to deal with it on a daily basis. Those issues appear with dense frequency and have a serious impact on our lives more than in the previous period. This essay below will look at the various cause for this and suggest some possible measures to address the problem.
There are a number of factors leading to light up the pressure in each individual. The first contributing factor easily observed is the social factors such as dozens of jobs and the working preference effect. Recruiters require more skillful workers than before, not just friendly or hardworking is sufficient. So the challenging of work is on the rise progress and generating a myriad tension on their shoulder, usually, conflict with boss also result to stressful. The intention of working more than 8 hours a day and even weekends is an increase in the labor force. For instance, many companies and factories claim their employee devote more time to working and unless they can be fired or salary cutting. another constituent contributing to those problems is the daily environment, especially family relationships. Due to the lack of time for family activity and more time for screen-activity, people tend to isolate themselves from each other and make an enormous distance even if co-living in one house. Relating to family problems, financial is can not be mention. It is inevitable that the conflict will be taken related to family finances. Additionally, the result of pressure from the knowledge inside your mind. They put tension on themselves by overthinking and comparing themselves with others. People tend to compare their failures with other successes and then underestimate their efforts.
While it could be impossible to eliminate the stress, some steps can be done to reduce it. Firstly, the method that can be taken to tackle the problem is moving your physical body. By doing some exercise you can release the stress hormones and create more content once. Walking, running, playing, and enjoying a life contribute to produces more positive energy and bring your stubborn tension down to the bottom level. Secondly, spend more time on self-caring and family more than on other relationships especially with your phone. permit yourself to relax and doing nothing to recovery in order to get back your power, clean up your toxic mindset. Finally, recognize and be aware that you are stress and cope with it instead of ignoring it.
In conclusion, pressure results from a number of reasons. nevertheless, some solutions can be implemented to combat the problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10185185185 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74325772813 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4451244044 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.16 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.28 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 20.0 3.9879759519 502% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245592563051 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630201602332 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472781045566 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146171656355 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150331030516 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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