You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear John,
It was great to receive your letter.
Time flies so fast. It has been for a long time since the day we knew each other at the high school. I am glad that we still keep in touch sometimes like this.
As mentioned in your letter, I can sympathize what you are concerning. After consideration, I think going to college is not an option for you. According to my experience, four years of colleges is only for people who do not know what they should do in the future. In terms of your case, you are an ambitious and independent person, you already have a noble dream of becoming an entrepreneur in real estate to pursue. Therefore, I think it's time for you to embark on your dream as soon as possible rather than spending more time on colleges.
Apparently, getting a job is the best choice now. First, running a business is not easy, it requires a lot of skills. Thus you need to accumulate more experience from the market to start your own business. In addition, I think a job in the housing market would be a good idea for you to figure out if it is the one you would like to do your business later rather than studying in a college.
From my humble knowledge, there are some job titles you might be interested in such as a broker, or a digital marketer. These jobs require necessary skills to start your own company and help you sharpen your skills.
I hope this suggestion can help you somehow.
If you need more information or need to grab a cup of coffee to discuss more, please don't hesitate to tell me.
Best regards,
Mira
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... your letter, I can sympathize what you are concerning. After consideration, I think going to ...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... not easy, it requires a lot of skills. Thus you need to accumulate more experience ...
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Line 13, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...a cup of coffee to discuss more, please dont hesitate to tell me. Best regards, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42708333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48065188549 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0687435 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289696899771 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833597045691 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653317123745 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117850749627 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733633407781 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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