A local college is having an international day You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures Write a letter to the college head In your letter Tell him her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they

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A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
 Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
 Explain why would they be of interest to the students
 Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

Dear Mr. Thompson,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in delivering a speech on international day organized by your esteemed education center.

To begin with, I would love to tell the students about the uniqueness of my country. Furthermore, I am willing to throw some light on sports, culture and languages. I have plethora of data to speak on verities of spices and food consumed in India. Besides, politics can never remain untouched.

On top of it, I understand that young generation have some negative thought process about the politics of my country that has been conveyed through media. I have authentic data to support the positive aspects of politics of our country. I am sure children will be impressed to listen to it.

I have a request to arrange the projector as I am going to share few data and pictures that is not available on television. Also, sound system would be of great help in conveying whatever has been played on.

I hope you will accept my request, thanking you in advance.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Urvashi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, look, so, then, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89839572193 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74504016422 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652406417112 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9410808671 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221099293578 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066107906832 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505615309977 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100710426068 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032975738409 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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