Some people think that it is always an advantage to buy local products rather
than those made in other countries. Agree or disagree?
It is frequently argued by the people whether the usage of the local products is (useful) than those produced in the foreign countries or not. In my belief, it may vary from person to person and one's accord, whether to use local or foreign products.
Often people enjoy using local products maybe due to the fact that they are related to one's culture and also, maybe they are not extremely costly. However, a certain amount people prefer to use local products which are only manufactured in a particular region. Hence, such local products are consumed in a particular area and thus, are easily available. For instance, a number of regional clothes are effortlessly available in the same region on the contrary may not be readily available anywhere else and can be costlier. In such cases, a number of people may prefer to use freely available and cheap local products.
On the other hand, a number of people may find the quality of foreign products more superior as compared to those of the local products maybe owing to the fact that, of the cost difference and quality. Although the price is more, people may love to purchase those artifacts which are unique and not facilely available. For example, merchandise of certain foreign music bands is not available in local markets on the contrary, certain number of fans may purchase them online from globalized websites. Moreover, it may also vary from person to purchase in quantities or spend their money on the quality of the products.
Thus, even though local products can be cheaper and handily available, an amount of people may find that they lack in quality. In my opinion,
although foreign products can be costly as compared to local products, it may vary from person to person whether, to utilize local products or products from overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., it may vary from person to person and ones accord, whether to use local or foreign...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ue to the fact that they are related to ones culture and also, maybe they are not ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90522875817 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49506540207 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4115365271 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198873222591 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893031548979 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671702042754 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130031855951 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016655639404 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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