The diagram below describes how stormwater is recycled in an Australian city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The drawing illustrates the way in which stormwater is recycled into usable clean water in a city in Australia.
In general, it is patently obvious that there are five prominent stages in this process, initiating with the infiltration of rainwater through the residential’s drains, and culminating with the formation of clean water used for living.
At the first stage of the process, rainwater containing impurities is collected through the sewer system of residential areas throughout the city. The collected water will be transferred to a water filtration system consisting of four filters in the next step to clean the impurities present in the water. Through the first filter in the system, the plastic and rubbish will be removed from the water. Then, in the second filter, all tiny particles will be eliminated. The third and fourth layers can be considered as the two most important filter layers in the second stage because these filters will purify bacteria, viruses and harmful molecules, salts in the water.
In the third stage, each liter of water, after going through a complex filtration process, is purified again by 4 milligrams of chlorine. Finally, qualified treated water will be stored in a water storage area and prepared to supply clean water for the city.
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- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 95
- The diagram below describes how stormwater is recycled in an Australian city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The family has a great influence on children s development but the influence outside the home plays a bigger part in children s life Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that in order to continue improving the quality of high school education students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers Others however believe that this would result in the loss of respect and discipline for teach 78
- Some people say advertising has positive economic effects Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people dissatisfied with who they are and what they have Discuss both views and give your own opinion 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, then, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17703349282 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75299712221 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5635270121 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0184562945109 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124309861349 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351601383713 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0279697188035 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484449740411 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.