Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s modern society, consumerism has become more popular. Many individuals are concerned about what they consume rather than the degradation of their living environment. It is argued that most people do not give much care to environment-related issues as they deserve. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this statement for the reasons I outline below.
First of all, humans just concern about things that have effects on their lives directly. Because environmental problems have not had a certain effect on changing their lives, many people think that protecting the environment is not yet a top priority for them. By way of illustration, farmers living in Vietnamese rural areas are being affected by climate change and water pollution. However, because these impacts do not change too much to their daily life, they continue to throw household waste into rivers and canals and burn large amounts of coal and fossil fuels.
Besides, many people believe that environmental protection is not the responsibility of each individual, but environmental organizations and the government take care of it. Although many people know the effects of environmental pollution and its causes, they still consume lots of goods and energy from transportation every day, especially disposable products, and believe that waste treatment and air problems are the responsibility of the government and environmental organizations. For instance, in many cities in Vietnam, there are millions of tons of garbage discharged from households, mainly plastic bottles, and nylon bags.
To conclude, although the majority of the population does not give environmental issues attention enough, they have been affecting negatively our life at any rate. We should give priority to solving them and take action together to protect our environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, for instance, at any rate, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50354609929 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10707916678 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8764755368 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229351119697 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744154547121 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699563859974 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137298434111 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974190160206 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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