Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a common belief that music is one of the most popular way of entertainment thanks to the pleasure feelings and pleased environment it brings to listeners. Some people reckon that music is an exceptional and wonderful way to gather and befriend with everyone around the world, who comes from different cultures and ranges many groups of ages. In my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion due to diversity and flexibility of music and its soulfulness
Firstly, music is a useful tool to reflect human’s life. When listening to different kinds of music, individuals can learn and understand more about others’ attitudes as well as their culture. This helps a lot in enhacing people’s community skills because it offer an objective and inclusive view about other emotions and the ways they think or behave. Thanks to music, when we meet forgeiners directly or have chances to co-operate with them, we are able to make friends as well as become familiar and be on good terms with them more effortlessly.
Furthermore, music is attractive and interesting thanks to its soulfulness. People of various ages can all enjoy and feel the emotion of composers or singers in every music. Therefore, old generations like our grandparents or even our parents can be more understanding and sympathetic with their children when they have chances to take joy in the young’s favourite music list. I rarely talk with my aunt because of our gap in age and opinion. Nevertheless, when we sing together and talk about music, we are on the same boat, which make us both feel happy and compassionate towards each other.
In summary, from my point of view, music is a really effective way to connect individuals globally despite of their differences in cultures or ages owing to its variation and soulfulness.
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Message: Did you mean 'offers'?
Suggestion: offers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00662251656 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87583496322 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0249159417 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290022704653 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101073258336 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513175787235 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176797217583 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653338273527 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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