It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside
People have a disparate point of view regarding to living places .Some individuals have crave to live in cities however other prefer countryside.
On the other hand, mostly people single out living in city due to its immense benefits. In big cities,they get more chance to validate themselves as well as they can earn big amount of money by hard work. amenities of city makes your life easier and smooth as you can get everything at walking distance. However, it augment the circle of person to make many friends. Living in city keeps you updated about the world.
However, living in rural areas you can release the nature and stay healthy. apart from that you can get fresh air force along with vegetables for eating that keeps you physical fit and fine. Less pollution and transportation make rural area amicable. One main benefit of living in rural area is that you get to live in colossal houses at less cost of living.
To sum up, living in rural or countryside have their on benefits characteristics. On the contrary it depends on choices of alternatives that which area they preferred more.
- The chart below show the type of transport young people in four countries prefer to use 70
- the increase in people s life expectancy means that they have to work order to face for their retirement one alternative is that people start to work at a young Graves in this alternative a positive or negative development 61
- Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part time to ensure better opportunity in the future To what extent do you agree and disagree 61
- while some people consider global warming to the most pressing involvement problem which we have had the most other believe that before a station has a more devastating impact on our word 89
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and usage upwards fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: craved
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Suggestion: , they
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Suggestion: Amenities
... earn big amount of money by hard work. amenities of city makes your life easier and smoo...
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Message: Did you mean 'augments'?
Suggestion: augments
...ything at walking distance. However, it augment the circle of person to make many frien...
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Suggestion: Apart
...an release the nature and stay healthy. apart from that you can get fresh air force a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79473684211 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56939692419 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4106197075 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161177557623 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615512858249 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605026841945 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105835378776 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504458804117 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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