The increase in People’s life expectancy means that they have to work older to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at a young age. Is this alternative a positive or a negative development?
Irrefutable, in this modern era, the youth generation becomes busy in the other contemporary technology they do not work in the earliest age. Thus, elder people teach their children to do work at a younger age because there are lots of benefits for doing work at a young age so this is a positive development for the youth generation not only but also older people.
To begin with, there are ample predominant benefits for the modern generation. first and foremost, increase vocational skill in the earliest age and they have an immensely experience regarding any subject field. Thus can evolve their brainpower. secondly, the reason they are earning handsome money at an earlier age so it will be helpful in future life.
Moreover, youth generation working at a young age primarily, the youngest are highly passionate and more creative. consequently, they are a better workforce for any organization. furthermore, because of their physical strength and energy power stabilize is very good than older. They are flexible towards work and they can also work hard, for instance, Bill Gates start a business in his early life now he is a very successful businessman in the world.
However, some also drawbacks related to this trend firstly, elder people unfit for many organization to elaborate the working condition of the workplace. the secondary, young generation do not have abundant knowledge regarding systems. Thus companies also face the loss of exploiting young minds. in addition to this, reduce the chance of promotion for youth employees.
In recapitalization, I think it is a positive development for youth as well as older people for the earn something and learn something new technology and experience and cognitive and vocational skill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: First
...ant benefits for the modern generation. first and foremost, increase vocational skill...
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...skill in the earliest age and they have an immensely experience regarding any subject field. Thus can e...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...experience regarding any subject field. Thus can evolve their brainpower. secondly, ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...ield. Thus can evolve their brainpower. secondly, the reason they are earning handsome m...
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...re highly passionate and more creative. consequently, they are a better workforce for any or...
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... better workforce for any organization. furthermore, because of their physical strength and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19434628975 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91892469327 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7846779115 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380199050488 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110503155882 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770468444213 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203466732028 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678413436391 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.