Some people think that government should give preference to the medical sector instead of education and sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a debatable issue that we the government should provide medical facilities for education and sports amenities to people. In this essay, I will discuss both views along with my opinion.
Providing health related facilities have some benefits for people. First of all, it will be more beneficial for people, who are under poverty line, since they do not have enough money to get proper treatment if they have any health related disorder. It will be very beneficial for impoverished people as government provide them free medical services. Thus poor people can easily do their work when they are provided with free health-related services because at that time they do not have any kind of worries related to the medical expense.
If I talk about education and sports facilities, there are many merits of providing these facilities to people. At first, I am going to talk about the advantages of giving free of cost education to all puples, undoubtedly when all students are provided with free educational amenities illiteracy rate will be decreased. Due to this, most of the learners will have more knowledge about their healthy diet and health because health is an important part of their studies. Secondly, if government provide sports facilities for people, their help will be improved. To explain it, by playing games their immune system will work with more efficiency due to which people will remain out of the range of diseases. Therefore providing academic and sports facilities is more beneficial for improving people's health.
In conclusion, there are many positive result of availing free education and sports facilities rather than free of cost medical services, according to me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17028985507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65433852824 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4294534218 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163322371983 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732045453852 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543664068832 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128222283641 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822200447369 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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