Tourism has caused environmental problems in many parts of the world. What sort of problems has been caused and what can be done about them?
There are many things in Viet Nam that make a deep impression on people from over the world. I do take a lot of pride of being a Vietnamese citizen. Let's see what do we have. forest is gold ocean is silver oceans of money. Besides that, Vietnam is endowed with many scenic spots in all country. Vietnamese cuisine is fresh, healthy, light,...
But today i'm here to tell you guys about Vietnamese national garment. Every country in the world has a traditional customs and Vietnamese are proud to own the ao dai.
Through 2000 years of development history. ao dai has been crystallized from many types of ancient customes. it is more and more creative by designers to exude the purity and gentleness of women. it is ardous to generalise beyond saying ao dai is one of the symbols of vietnam. When one hears about vietnam the word "ao dai" will most probably be mentioned.
Nowadays ao dai still remained ubiquitous and influencial in the modern day vietnamese culture. Although ao dai is no longer worn by men nor do women a daily basis. it is still the most favourite dress of vietnamese women in traditional festivals or special occasions such as: tet, wedding, graduation,.....
In some high schools and university the white ao dai is considered school uniform for female student. this is the justifications why we can easily come across people wearing it on the street.
ao dai has been also an inspiration of poets, artists, fashion designer.
The beauty of Vietnamese women is honoured thanks to ao dai, so it is hard to think of any outfit better-suited the Vietnamese than ao dai itself. ao dai, therefore, is an ideal souvenir for foreign tourists upon leaving Vietnam, to remind them of a beautiful country that they have been to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79207920792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76137649439 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9105893754 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1428571429 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0793112392581 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258556240128 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283255696229 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397766511581 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027816871644 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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