The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Following the development and advancement of technology, the internet has become a popular means of communication and sharing information. Although some people believe that the internet should be an open platform for everyone with as few restrictions as possible, I personally think the opposite.
Firstly is the issue of misleading information, or more commonly called “fake news”, which is dangerous because they can manipulate users to think in a particular way that may even lead to violation of laws, for example, some people give false information regarding the policies of the government in order to convince other individuals to cause a riot. Secondly, some websites are designed for the sole purpose of stealing user’s data, for instance mobile phone number or home address. These can then be sold to another company, thus making a profit for the hacker.
It is understandable that some people want the internet to function without regulations since this has multiple benefits. It means that users can be more free in terms of posting and sharing contents of their preferences. It could also mean that some information that was previously blocked in some countries can now be available to be viewed by any users, including people within that country, hence increasing the diversity of information sources.
In conclusion, although the development of technology has positive implications, it has also deepened the issue of online security, especially when hackers are constantly inventing new programs to bypass the security network. For this reason, I strongly believe that strict measures are a must to ensure safety for online users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sharing contents of their preferences. It could also mean that some information t...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ngly believe that strict measures are a must to ensure safety for online users.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39230769231 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95882993026 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5748704052 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15792157879 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616468900782 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522296762536 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978968406632 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621880759146 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.