Computer become more intelligent than humans .do you think it is negative or postive development
It is irrefutable that without computers all technical work will halt. Therefore, computers are now a crucial need for whole universe and by each passing day use of computer accelerated due to its advancement in every field. So, a fair amount of society say, it is a favorable development while others are opposit to this phonomenon.In the upcoming paragraphs this essay sheds light on both perspectives.
To embark with, people take plethora of advantages from artifical intelligence. First of all, computers are able to do every work related to study or job, making easy and fast for humans.For example, the calculations which are done by AI are more accurate and reliable, being a humam it may be impossible for tackling millions of equations in seconds. Therfore, technology is in the favore of human by playing a profund roll in every field of life.
Although, computers have several benefits to world, some drawbacks are also originated by it. Firstly, unemployment is a major problem due to heavy usage of technology. For instance, in many organisations and companies all records are stored and maintained with the help of softwares instead of manual labour. As a result, organizations rely on computer for efficent and relible work than employers.
To conclude, despite having advatages, there are most concerning drawbacks of technology. Although it makes the life of human being easy by providing several facilites, it accelerate the unemployment rate at alarming stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26050420168 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04965613044 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668067226891 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9530433091 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124305401535 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385994039722 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322749378779 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666366342372 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213469986731 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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