some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people argue that governments should spend both time and economy on society instead of using it for wild animals protection. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view and I have several reasons to explain my opinion.
First of all, Wildlife is a gift of Mother Nature that covers wild animals including birds, deers, leopards, so on, and this gift is being threatened seriously most by human behaviors. For example, people are still cutting forests to make buildings which leads to the ecological systems reduce rapidly. Therefore, people should be aware of protecting them so that they can live with wild and free as their natural state. Moreover, one of the reasons is to protect wild animals because the positive effects contribute to the community. For example, many companies use bees for agriculture because they can help the flower by transporting pollen to other flowers which helps them grow, while bees also produce honey for people. Furthermore, some wild animals are becoming extinction such as pandas, polar bears, rhinos, and if people do not have solutions to protect them, they will not exist in the far future, thus we need to protect them for our future generation so that they can see and know them but not through books.
In conclusion, I believe that people should take time and money by doing everything as much as possible to protect all wildlife creatures in our world to help them exist. This will help our world become better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...on society instead of using it for wild animals protection. Personally, I completely di...
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Line 2, column 990, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ure generation so that they can see and know them but not through books. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48622636541 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1809788205 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22085032147 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916523905989 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430618850211 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157540608979 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113705406903 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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