Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that governments should take charge of scientific research instead of private corporations. I would disagree with this statement and in this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, governments can not fully concentrate on scientific research as the fact that they have so many things to worry about and take care of such as education and healthcare. What I mean is that this may lead to the delay of upcoming discoveries, which results in the slow growth and development of the country. Therefore, the scientific investigation should be managed by companies as they can invest more effectively with specialized knowledge and professional technology. Many corporations make a profit from this field, so of course, they would be more focused on rendering good research results.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of letting the companies carried out scientific research. That is to say, many of them are profit-oriented and they just think about how to earn as much money as they can. For example, many people who are suffering from the disease cannot afford to buy drugs as their prices are raised alarmingly. What’s more, some organizations also do illegal research on nuclear weapons, which would threaten the peace of the world. Thus, it is the responsibility of the government to manage this kind of situation.
To sum up, I would restate that although private companies should be allowed to do scientific research as it may help to progress the country, the research must be supervised by the governments in order to provide high-quality and reliable results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, i mean, kind of, of course, such as, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12686567164 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98596068939 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7567408591 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303034678262 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104294294102 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073666941286 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185299920478 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392945243696 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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