Introduction: The process in which making clothes from recycled plastic bottles are manufactured can be summarised as follows.
The process in which making clothes from recycled plastic bottles are manufactured can be summarised as follows.
In general, there are three main steps in the process, the first being the collecting of plastic bottles. This follows the washing and boiling of them, leading to the final stage of straining and weaving, ready to sew clothes.
The process begins when the plastic bottles are transported by truck to factories, where they are sorted and then cut into small pieces. Next, these particles are passed through an apparatus to be washed. They are then placed in a container and dried for ten hours. Afterwards, they are transferred to a cylindrical boiler for smelting.
Following this, the melted substance is strained and made into yarn. After that, the yarn is weaved into the desired fabric that is suitable for making clothes and rolled up into separated units. When this has been done, the recycled fabric is manufactured into clothes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...made into yarn. After that, the yarn is weaved into the desired fabric that is suitabl...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed fabric is manufactured into clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12738853503 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53355908952 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2866267611 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361313498409 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136711710052 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226746677269 0.0667982634062 339% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280587061659 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.302421706405 0.056905535591 531% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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