The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years.
What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?
Do you think flights should be taxed more?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Due to globalisation, a paradigm shift in people's lifestyles, and the expansion of tourism and international commerce, cost-effective and frequent flights all around the world are quite prevalent nowadays, which offers both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, before drawing a rational conclusion, I will evaluate both the positive and the negative sides of such a flight.
With regards to advantages, speed is one of them.The utmost speed is only provided by air travel, and travelers can therefore save their important time. Comfort is another feature of flying, in addition. You will have the feeling of being at home when you're on board the aircraft. In addition, when someone is in the air, they may appreciate the breathtaking view of the terrain, which is a unique experience. In contrast, the adverse effects of the tremendous growth of air travel on the environment can not, however, be taken notice of. The amount of air pollution it causes is quite alarming. A single flight emits a wide variety of carbon emissions into the air, contributing to the greenhouse effect. Secondly, there are a lot of natural resources needed to provide air flights. Aircraft burn too much oil, more than other modes of transport. An increase in flying numbers means that all aircraft are supplied with a large amount of fossil fuel. This is why natural resources are progressively running out day by day. In addition, city airports are hampering local population tranquility and raising the risk of terrorist strikes.
Many experts argue that increased taxation is one means of monitoring the negative impact of increased air transport. Though this might seem a reasonable solution, I, however, disagree. Instead of increasing the fee, which just burdens the masses of people to pay more to fly, efficient measures such as the introduction of clean jet fuel and strong security should be put in place.
To sum up, growing air transport has some adverse effects, such as air pollution and sound pollution, and a threat to national security. However, imposing a heavy tax is not a feasible solution to this. Instead, government tariffs should be eliminated to make airfares cheaper, a pertinent demand for contemporary citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2243767313 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91876418987 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642659279778 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0376131148 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.05 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136841885586 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328484534036 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352702724035 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846328613121 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333547094282 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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