In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Many people in several nations believe that they should be owning a house instead of renting it. In my opinion, owning and renting accommodations have both advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, there are some positive impacts on owning a house. Many people believe that owning a house is a sign of success because it proves to others how wealthy you are. For example, many successful businessmen own many houses which reveal their huge properties and high status in society. Moreover, when you own a house, you can change it toward your personality without any complaints. Thus you can inspire your imaginations to create the unique house that only you have. In addition, people want to own a house because it is true that a house's value is higher than rent accommodations if they want to live in there for the long term.
However, owning a house also has some notable disadvantages. Owning a house these days is very difficult because not everyone can afford to buy a house. For instance, numerous people who work as a worker will need to save a lot of money if they want to own a house. Besides, the price of land in real estate has increased rapidly day by day because of the population explosion so if people want to have a house, he or she will pay a huge amount of cash, and if they do not have enough money, those will need to get loans by asking relatives or the banks. This causes negative impacts on their lives which increases their stress because they are worried about financial burdens and reduces their mental health.
In conclusion, both renting and owning a house have both advantages and disadvantages. Everybody should consider wisely how to take rent or own which they can afford in their financial status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...everal nations believe that they should be owning a house instead of renting it. In my op...
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Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...our personality without any complaints. Thus you can inspire your imaginations to cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72039473684 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59715769622 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.647988468 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197298190411 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769171627732 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272905164652 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124038115748 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322482569343 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.