Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your essay. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Everyday life has been more engaging, either on a social media or daily work, it has several effects on the human behavior. I personally believe that, our current way of life will have adverse effect on the future generations. In regard to the context as asserted in the prompt, I agree with the author positing the propositions herein.
First and foremost, during these time most of people prefer being involved in social media which has caused people to remain in solitude for most of their time. Social media and internet are so interactive and addicting it had made people be less social and people lack in communication skill in many different ways. If people do not built networks and communicate well on daily basis, it will impede on personal as well as career. My personal experience is compelling example of this. When I was a sophomore, I used be engaged in social media for considerable amount of time, I used to prefer being alone. After joined college I was having difficulties in building relations with the classmates. As a result, I was depressed and I always felt alone. With the help of my teacher, when I came out of my shell it was more cheerful and adventitious. I had friends to share my feelings and build professional network. As a result, I have co-founded a company with my college friends. To sum up, such kind of issues will prevail in future generation and it is predictable that, human behavior may be less social.
Secondly, we are too busy in our daily working schedule during present days. It has curbed the personal time to bond with family and relatives. In contrast, if we share our feelings and thoughts to our loved ones, it will help us to organize our thoughts and be imperturbable. For instance, my brother was too busy in his daily work life. He hardly used to spend time with his family members as he was always feeling lethargic and used to sleep without proper communication with the family members. After a long time, he as so depressed and he used to have anxiety attack several times a day. Later on, after he quit job and find more comfortable job he then began to open up and he is now happy and very supportive. This incident has brought a great joy in the family. Therefore, current way of life can hinder in emotional intelligence of the humans and people can be mentally retarded. This case can augment in further generation as technology has made us for higher engagement in work.
Conclusively, our current lifestyle can have negative impact on our offspring mainly by making people less social and by hindering to built healthy bond within the family.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations Use specific reasons and examples to support your essay Be sure to use your own words Do not use memorized examples 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... First and foremost, during these time most of people prefer being involved in social media w...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d people lack in communication skill in many different ways. If people do not built networks a...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of time, I used to prefer being alone. After joined college I was having difficultie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in contrast, kind of, as a result, as well as, in regard to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71834061135 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68571821327 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502183406114 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3525331483 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.44 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.32 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205380852252 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533349039469 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476602447515 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125371621284 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116877050343 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.