Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are some controversial ideas heating a debate over the impacts of international cooperation. While some people think that association of distinct nations have tremendous benefits on environmental protection, others assume the benefits lie mostly in the worldwide business. From my point of view, the merits of world business overweight its counterpart.
Obviously, coordination among different countries plays a paramount role in maintain the high environmental quality. Since global warming is an alarming issue which spreads over the planet, a country’s protective measures are just a minimal thing compared to the drastic change of the climate. Hence, the cooperation, which can not only provide an abundant source of human but also unlimited budgets, is able to deal with this dire problem in a large-scale and more effectively. Moreover, the international association means cross-bordered countries will exchange the technologies and technics. under developing and developing countries can easily adopt advanced technologies by the support from more furnishing countries. Thus, the protection of environment will be substantial.
While the redeeming features of the collaboration around the world in environment are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those which benefit on world commercial are ignored. First and foremost, the compromise among the countries will stimulate the prosperity of each member. While a sole country’s growth depends on the trading products internally, by joining an international group, it can expand the profits which directly contribute to nation’s prosperity through selling over the world. In addition, the source of money invested will be expanded. Having a connection with other countries, a company is able to receive a fund from both government and international investors. Hence, they have more incentive to develop.
In conclusion, although this phenomenon has certain positive benefits on the environment, I still have a conception that the cooperation can have far-reaching impacts on business around the world.
- Today people are getting greedy and selfish Some people argue that we should go back the old days and show respect for the family and community so that we can make the world a better place to live in To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment while others think that the main benefit is in the world business Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport However it is no longer the main form of transport What are the reasons What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population 84
- Many countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world Is this a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Under
...exchange the technologies and technics. under developing and developing countries can...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80983606557 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26272507258 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9861051951 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217305527038 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621105816236 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715780850566 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144364015231 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917430495765 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.