Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
In the progressive and sophisticated world where we live in, teachers play an important role in every society. It is a highly debated that whether they were more valued by society in the past rather than they are today or not. Personally, I believe that teachers are less appreciated today for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, technology and social media has weakened teachers value in the last decades. To be more specific, Internet or websites and social media such as YouTube has a lot of science information that would decrease the need to the teachers. Today many students prefer surfing the Internet and websites instead of learning from teachers. Not only it helps them to approach information much easier, it also helps them save money by pushing the barriers of spending money to the teachers. Consequently, it decrease teachers value and affect their place in the society.
secondly, governments claims this statement with considering low salaries for teachers. The less salary proposed to teachers, the less value they earn in the society.
In other words, people who choose to be teacher will change their mind when they find out about the low quantity of salary they will get from the government. For instance, a friend of mine wanted to be a teacher since he was a kid. It was his childhood dream and when he became a teacher, it was like his dream came true. But after just a few months he changed his mind and decided to search for another job. This example demonstrates that governments do not appreciate teachers as much as they deserve to be.
To sum up, I firmly believe that teachers are less appreciated today because their value and place in the society have been affected by the technology and social media and the low salary they get from the governments.
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- TPO 41 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...money to the teachers. Consequently, it decrease teachers value and affect their place i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... affect their place in the society. secondly, governments claims this statement with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8380952381 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58402948219 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7737921713 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254908707859 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810364668181 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807367950116 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139804802971 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701745588577 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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