Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem, and what can we do to prevent it?
Environmental deterioration is worsening to be seen now as a global concern. This essay will explore contributing factors and several solutions to this growing problem.
First and foremost, the explosion of the world population is to blame. This has boosted the demand for shelter and other essentials such as food. More and more land is being exploited and utilized for agricultural and residential purposes, which poses a threat to the quality of soil and the existence of various species in the ecosystem. Another significant cause for concern is industrialization. When supplied for different types of industries, the depletion of natural resources such as coal, fuel, and water would be even worse. Also, the industrial waste which was discharged from the manufacturing procedure could badly damage the environment, especially the air and water.
The first measure to be taken is to restrict the birth rate. In this way, the use of land will decrease time by time results in the maintenance of forests as well as endangered breed of animals and plants. Again, the responsibility should fall to the government to follow and regulate the waste management of all the companies. The amount of trash, therefore, would be significantly declined. One final suggestion, which could help enormously, is to raise the awareness and knowledge of the community towards environmental disintegration. For instance, various campaigns and events should be arranged by notable organizations.
To conclude, overpopulation and industrial development could have a detrimental impact on the natural environment. However, possible solutions could be adopted by both the policymakers, authorities, and the public to alleviate such a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51320754717 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30820957967 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2148531333 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108582339025 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344023768915 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392442821665 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078329172204 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469823012369 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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