Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Celebrities often face intrusion of media in to their personal lives. Their private life is dissected and discussed widely by the public and media as if they are not entitled for the privacy. This essay discusses both views followed by my personal opinion.
To begin with, the stars or celebrities we feverishly follow and try to imitate, are also fellow human beings. They do have their own lives and pitfalls like the rest of us. Though it is great to be able to set trends and influence others, it is not comfortable to have someone watching our each and every move and be judged for the imperfections. For example, female movie stars are often under scrutiny for their physical appearance. When Aishwarya Rai gained weight after pregnancy, media often criticized her for not loosing it immediately.
On the other hand, the popularity of a star is directly related to the number of people who want to know more about them. As a result, their lives are under constant media / public attention. They are expected to be perfect and act graciously all the times though they do have their share of good and bad days . For instance, it becomes national news when a star misbehaves with a media person and are often trolled on social media platforms for such behavior. There are even cases of stars who suffered from depression because of the constant negative criticism in public media.
To conclude, every one has the right for privacy, famous people or not, and a line should between private and public lives. Media does not have a free reign to publish whatever they want irrespective of a person's consent. There should be a law against defaming others without proper proof.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...say discusses both views followed by my personal opinion. To begin with, the stars or celebri...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...do have their share of good and bad days . For instance, it becomes national news ...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: FREE_REIGN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'free rein'?
Suggestion: free rein
...and public lives. Media does not have a free reign to publish whatever they want irrespect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84027777778 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50933098133 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.250999984 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240584678584 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823934599847 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570390478505 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161170606633 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066424603395 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.