any successful individuals were pointed as "lucky" by others with intentions like lowering their accomplishments or jealousy
Through centuries, many successful individuals were pointed as "lucky" by others with intentions like lowering their accomplishments or jealousy. Although every successful person needs some luck in all his/her life tasks, i disagree with considering them lucky and neglecting their everyday struggles.
Planning makes people not loose their precious time and not depend on luck. Short and long time management helps in the process of being successful. "I wish a day had 36 hours" said by hustlers who want more things done everyday and achieve their goals sooner.
Gambling is taking action with relying on luck but not ascertaining the situation. Despite the fact that taking risk is an inherent part of the journey to success, a successful person will measure every path to take the best one.
Lucky people would ran out of luck and fail sometime in future but top dogs are used to failing. therefore, they are persevere in facing numerous obsticles and learn from every experience on the way to bear fruit.
In conclusion, a brilliant combination of
time management, risk management and perseverance will being passionate people success while others count on their luck. thus, nobody needs luck to have the world by the tail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ds some luck in all his/her life tasks, i disagree with considering them lucky an...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...struggles. Planning makes people not loose their precious time and not depend on l...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d by hustlers who want more things done everyday and achieve their goals sooner. Gam...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'run'
Suggestion: run
...ke the best one. Lucky people would ran out of luck and fail sometime in future...
^^^
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...uture but top dogs are used to failing. therefore, they are persevere in facing numerous ...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'persevered'.
Suggestion: persevered
...re used to failing. therefore, they are persevere in facing numerous obsticles and learn ...
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Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n conclusion, a brilliant combination of time management, risk management and per...
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Line 10, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...ccess while others count on their luck. thus, nobody needs luck to have the world by...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.315 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85558662975 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1024937345 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282251815954 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943429022057 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155760344521 0.0667982634062 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117319286442 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159461904957 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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