Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Many people claim that hosting an international sports event is beneficial for the country, while others’ points of view, such events pose a negative effect. I believe that there are both sides to the argument.
Firstly, organizing an event may go with potential in media that may draw enormous crowds. The government just wants this to happen to get good advertising in their country so that many other countries can recognize the power in their economies and possibly get more united with them. Also, when tourists come to the country to watch the event, they would probably visit that country. If they feel excited about its cultural, scenic spots or the food they can come back in some days, it can perhaps support to get a rocket in economies. Therefore, this is a great opportunity for countries to gain several benefits.
On the other hand, there is no denying that arising matters can occur when hosting an event. Firstly, the money that they invest into the event is enormous, which would be a risk for some areas which do not have a fine budget. Also, there would need a large number of laborers to prepare for this event, and having an employer who can launch this scheme without any bad consequences is not an easy task. In addition, because this is a really outstanding event and the number of people who care about this event is not small. Therefore, the government needs to ensure some people want to corrupt through kickback or dubious dealings not occur. In addition, the locals may be affected by the noise of constructing process as the life quality is able to decrease.
In conclusion, if the government can ignore the negative side of hosting an event and accept to do it, it would be beneficial and worth taking the risk
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73770491803 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46590510505 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3195479501 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260394748302 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085402040609 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652061267208 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166193797446 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854025575292 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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