Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this contemporary world, there are many ways of getting information. Some people opine that the best way to approach news is the newspaper while others believe that there are other media. In my point of view, newspapers are one way among the many effective methods of getting information.
On the bright side, newspapers are easier for conventional or senior readers to acquire information. While technology advances are hardly adopted by the elderly, newspapers can easily be bought in a post office, grocery store and so on. Another advantage of newspapers is because of its own material. Many people would rather read newspapers than staring at smart devices. For instance, their eyes would be easier to read on paper than reading on screen. We cannot bear the favor of reading newspapers.
Turn to the other side of the argument, other media will bring more variety of news and information. Using a smartphone with unlimited access to the internet, users can acquire a wide range of information, from entertainment to urgent matters. Another merit of using smart devices is their free accessibility. For example, to have a piece of newspaper, you must pay a huge amount of money each year. But with the advantage of the internet, almost everything is free and published to everyone. Also, some of the news on other media can be brought to us in a more interesting way. They could be included with colored pictures and videos, some newspaper pages include a comment section to discuss the topic of the article.
For all the aforementioned benefits of both ways of acquiring information, they have different aspects that are better than others. In my perspective, absorbing information from other media could be more beneficial than traditional newspapers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12068965517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86341679938 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6376465382 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278796171853 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841943003742 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113590734174 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172502614742 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883086626232 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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