Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever-growing population or to develop business and boost economies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
While it is recognized that public parks play a pivotal role in people's lives, others argue that we can get more benefits by developing houses or businesses there. Although it is irrefutable that it can create jobs and enhance economies, I personally disagree with this view as the green space serves an equally important purpose in the citizens' lives and there are other ways to generate revenue for the community and also maintain parks.
It is a well-known fact that green open areas are essential for humans, especially individuals in crowded cities. Public parks can offer green spaces, which kept people away from the noise of the traffic jams or stress in working. One cannot deny that it does not only boost the productivity of the employees but also contributes to the well-being of a community. Moreover, parks are able to reduce air pollution in urban areas.
On the other hand, we can observe that we can get economic benefits from renting the parks. They are optimal places to organize fairs, events, or music festivals. What is more, the local government may invigorate the economies by allowing local shops or restaurants to sell souvenirs or food. Government can also make public parks become tourist attractions. From these facts, one can conclude that the public parks can be used to facilitate the economies without dismantling them.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the argument that the public parks would be better used as accommodations or commercial zones. In my opinion, parks play an important part in human merriment and can also be used to promote local economies while creating a sense of community.
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree 89
- In some countries small town centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out of town stores As a result people without cars have limited access to out of town stores and it may result in an increase in the use of cars Do y 89
- More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly Why and what can we do to encourage this 84
- In some countries small town centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out of town stores As a result people without cars have limited access to out of town stores and it may result in an increase in the use of cars Do y 61
- The natural resources such as oil forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate What problem does it cause How can we solve these problems 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69666548867 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8486731009 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240827691559 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769691936089 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539265431402 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146818432456 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503236112871 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.