Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
Tourism has given diverse experience from your regular life whereas you feel relax from busy professional life. Nowadays more people like to visit remote places like Sahara or Antarctica or a number of isolated vast weather conditions geography. I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such kind of vacation.
To begin with, there are a plethora of advantages of exploring such places like boost in the economy, know the culture, learn survival techniques. First of all, an individual oughts to prepare themselves to fit for such locations and journeys. For example, touring such an area one can get to know their way of living, at the same time the restaurant and hotel industry will make more earnings. Additionally, the local residents will start getting money from renting their apartments or house. Apart from, this, they will be connected to the various parts of the world along with various cuisine, fashion and society experience knowledge can get through the people who came on the trip.
On the contrary, arriving more folks has an adverse impact on their environments and eco-system. To fulfil living for guest one need to cut the trees. In addition to this, Sahara or Antarctica their living species will be impacted to full fill the outsider accommodation. On the other, hand a human being needs to be extra cautious in those remote areas due to the fact a number of of the creatures like snakes or scorpions are extremely poisonous.
To conclude that going to such a distant region give a divergent sense of reality to a person. Also one needs to be extra prepared along with he can learn to survive in such adverse conditions. Besides that this will really hit habitats in that area also its ecosystem. I personally feel there should be a number of boundary consequently that it should not impact the ecology along with excitement and enjoyment in the tourism industry must not be affected.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, really, so, whereas, apart from, as to, in addition, kind of, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98705501618 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58146964053 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1426188797 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159619568399 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519640322696 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538782512188 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973155628974 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556862467971 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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