Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in major cities in Vietnam. What are the reason for this? Suggest some solutions.
In the last few years, youth criminality is quickly expanding in Vietnam’s major cities. It is becoming a serious problem that people have to concern and work out. This essay will examine what are the reasons for this issue and then propose some solutions.
To begin with, the most common reason is the lack of concern in children’s families. Living in big cities, people are always busy to earn money, therefore, sometimes they may forget to care about their child’s thoughts and feelings. Because of the carelessness, children or young adults always feel isolated in their community or even in their home. As a result, their thoughts gradually become negative and then they make mistakes. For solving this problem, I suggest that parents should spend a few time per day to talk with their children. Through the conversation, parents can know whether their children get troubles in life to give them some good advices.
The next reason for this issue is gaming addiction. Nowadays, with the advancement of technology, children are permitted to use modern gadgets such as mobile phones, computers, etc, very soon, especially in some major cities which children have better living quaility. As a consequence, they are easily addicted to playing games and do not care about anything around them. This situation lead to bad behaviour in children, some of them can guilty and cause serious consequences. To deal with, parents should limit and control their children’s playing games time. Parents have to explain the disadvantages of playing games too much and encourage their to balance between study and play games.
Last but not least, I personally think that education is play a crucial role in children’s growing up process. For instance, if a child is not properly taught some lessons about how to be a good person and some laws in their country, they will make mistakes because of their lack of knowledge. For this reason, government should try to improve the number of children go to school in Vietnam and make sure that laws must be taught.
In conclusion, the increasing of youth crime rate is the most warning prolems in our society, not only in Vietnam but also some countries in the world. To reduce this problem will not be very easy, it need the contribution and effort of many people in the country. However, I believe we can do it despite the fact that this is a tough issue.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91625615764 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5910299854 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549261083744 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3261047424 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0476190476 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228644663222 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674763409848 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745150629458 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143585522193 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680422607973 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91625615764 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5910299854 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549261083744 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3261047424 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0476190476 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228644663222 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674763409848 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745150629458 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143585522193 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680422607973 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.