Some people think watching movies is a waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Cinema is a form of modern art, which creates an imaginary world that, in most cases, resembles the real world. Movies invite us to live in another world, and experience life through fictitious characters forcing us to see the globe through a different lens. While some films are targeted to make the audience laugh and cry, others focus on delivering a message to society. Although a few people consider it frivolous, I vehemently believe that being able to view this manifestation of art can help people be more creative, de-stress, and provides an opportunity to boost their imagination. I shall elaborate on these views and discuss a few other aspects on this topic in the forthcoming paragraphs.
My views on this topic are strengthened by a few experiences in my personal life. For instance, I always find myself watching movies after a long day at work. Not only does it help me unload my tension, but it also assists me in being more innovative. The aesthetically pleasing costumes, furniture, make-up, and so on depicted can inspire many individuals in their own professional lives and allow them to think out of the box. Apart from visual appeal, the international distribution of films aids multiple content creators to showcase their culture in front of a broad audience. For example, I love to watch foreign movies to improve my vocabulary in a particular language.
In deep contrast to my views (expressed above), some people say that watching movies is a wasteful effort. They are of an opinion that the cinema can be addictive and sitting in one place can make people obese, which can be easily managed by enforcing discipline. Moreover, they say that movies that portray murders, assault, and robberies stimulate real-life crimes. Although criminal activities are triggered by viewing such violent representation, the entirety of the situation cannot be blamed on the media.
Based on the elaborate discussion in the paragraphs above, we can conclude that cinematography not only allows us to live in a different world for a while but also gives us a chance to learn new things and such a portrayal should never be considered superfluous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04748603352 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92693848306 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594972067039 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.277237075 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126718219117 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443874635243 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661078489035 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708023876276 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494665525746 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.