Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Dangerous law breaker has to response their action by taking capital punishment as consequence, but those punishments are disagree in some group of people because of its heartless. Therefore, I will discuss this views and give explanation for it.
It is obvious that in the 21st Century, the use of some heartless punishments are no longer been used because people's opinion about the punishment has changed recently. They are humane and kind-hearted for those who make terrible crimes, and it is allowed and accepted to forgive to law breakers unless they recognise how bad are their actions and show the feeling of sadness honestly. Even while staying in the jail, they will consider whether the criminals show good attitude or not to reduce the execution time.Take Hieu PC as an example, because of good attitude, Hieu Pc had been reduced execution time from 40 years to solely 8 years of stays in the prison.
In contrast, there are a few of psychos who did horrible crimes that against humanity, are often killers or terrorists. The will and mindset of these guys cannot be break in any ways, and therefore using capital punishments will be a suitable choice. For example, Osama Bin Laden, one of the most dangerous terrorists of all time, who was under surveillance the 9/11 event in New York and killed thousands of people, has been convicted for play against humanity and has been killed by an American military force.
In summary, although capital punishments are not humane and heartless, a few of cases would use those punishments for the protection of the society from dangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... consequence, but those punishments are disagree in some group of people because of its ...
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Line 4, column 515, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
...ude or not to reduce the execution time.Take Hieu PC as an example, because of good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65433609616 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1279585027 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.444444444 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213516783574 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08950054197 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066248515951 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130853284796 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261287625122 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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