With the increasing use of and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In today’s developing world, technology plays an important role in society. It can be said that some of the new technologies are able to replace human works. This essay will take a look at both sides of the coin and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, technology’s importance is obviously undeniable. In companies and factories, a programmed machine can run certain works separately with minimum fails, even more effective and hard-working than humans without tiredness. For instance, thousands of workers in the garment industry are facing unemployment because high-tech sewing machines are being developed day by day. These robotic devices are able to sew faster and more beautifully than the most skillful worker. Besides, machines run at a stretch; breaks are not necessary and they do not require a salary, neither. That sounds like a great deal! In families, technology is applied in creating convenient housewares, such as automatic vacuuming robots, dishwashers, washing machines, clothes dryers, and so on. Even basic housework can be done by high-tech devices.
On the other hand, this trend does have certain drawbacks. The listed advantages above may have you realized that the more technology develops, the more people face the risk of being replaced. Machines are created to serve humanity, but are we relying on these non-human objects too much? Whatever the answer is, robots are definitely not going to have the same roles as humans. For example, in the service sector nowadays, many restaurants use AI robots as staff. Customers may come for amusement and curiosity, but in the end, these staffs are nothing but programmed robots without the ability to solve unexpected problems. This leads to many failed circumstances when customers are not pleased and underrated the restaurants.
In short, technology is convenient but not almighty. In the tech-developing era, people must know how to control the impact of robotic machines, or else the outcome might be unpredictable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34591194969 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95138141698 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.870705163 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4736842105 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217133290577 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551879321357 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334015596046 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116615989763 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257632539333 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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