Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Is true that overpopulation is the most acute problem of our society, however, I party agree with this statement, due to the fact that there are various pressing issues that should be tackled.
On the one hand, due to the overpopulation it is getting harder to sustain peaceful lifestyle on earth because of numerous problems. First of all, poverty is one of the pressing problems that arose on account of overpopulation. To clarify, most countries are unable to provide the necessary environment for education because of excessive population growth, as a result, they are getting into crisis and becoming poor. For example, Africa has suffered from extreme poverty, which was caused by a weak educational system. Besides, malnutrition and famine are other challenges that our society is facing today. The hot climate of some countries does not allow cultivating crops, in addition, excessive population growth leads to an increase in mortality. For instance, today, overpopulation and climate crisis has pushed more than 520,000 people to the brink of starvation.
On the flip side, there are other problems like climate change and growing rate of health problems. When it comes to global warming, its impact on our planet earth is devastating because it can cause countless problems, namely, deforestation, ice melting, droughts and heat waves, all these conditions are positively correlates with global warming. All these pressing issues are related to global warming. To exemplify, due to ozone depletion and high temperature of the atmosphere millions of people died in the fire. Moreover, there is another problem which is poor health condition of the population. Today, owing to industrial revolution , agricultural land is being cleared for the construction of factories. The scarcity of land for sowing natural crops forces the world's population to eat unhealthy food. As an example, to maintain the energy balance of the body, we prefer fast food to raw food, because fruits and vegetables are too pricey, as a consequence of this phenomenon the number of people with diabetes, obesity and heart attacks is increasing.
In conclusion, we cannot deny the fact that population growth is an exigent problem of our society, nonetheless, I partially support this idea, because there are more severe problems as global warming and health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32439678284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89362261636 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571045576408 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2915948881 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.823529412 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140579169573 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401314818464 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572209987339 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112254442294 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079761954837 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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